A. Examples of Impenetrable Language

 
1) Clark et al.: "Foulds defined incipient neoplasia (the precursor state) as a region coextensive with the area of exposure to carcinogenic treatment that has permanent replicable new reactivity or increased capacity for neoplastic development."
 
2) Clark et al.: "Whimster viewed the entire human skin as an organ having '...a planned and organized composition built up of initially separate pieces with differing qualities, purposefully chosen and individually placed together so that together they form a picture or pattern, designed to fulfill an intention."
 
3) Clark et al.: "Foulds' Rule III. Progression is independent of growth. Progression occurs in latent tumor cells and in tumors whose growth is arrested. Progression without manifest growth may account for long delayed recurrences and metastases."
 
Critique: A reader, no matter how intelligent and motivated, cannot grasp the meaning of these sentences so illustrative of garble in so many of the writings authored by Clark and cohorts about tumor progression, melanocytic dysplasia, DN, and DNS.